春色满园关不住一枝红杏出墙来--谈初中作文教学的创新

摘要

Examination-oriented education leads to students' me-chanical simulation and reciting, and their writings are like being made in the same model. This paper firstly introduces the major problems in junior high school students' writing, and then dis-cusses the innovation of basic elements which a qualified Chinese language teacher should teach students in writing teaching.%应试作文教学造成大量的死记硬背和极端模仿，学生的作文从标题到构思、从语言到情感抒发大都呈现模式化倾向：大而不当的、一般化的作文标题；作文的体裁不够恰当，选材不够典型，构思的空间太小；作文语言与课本、作文辅导书中的语言惊人的一致，缺乏一些具体、生动的事例，以及形象、有文采的个性语言；表达的情感虚假，学生作文无病呻吟、胡编乱造、缺乏人文精神。一个优秀的初中语文教师，在作文教学中，起码要让学生学会作文的基本要素的创新：有先声夺人的标题、平中见奇的构思、千锤百炼的语言以及感同身受的情感体验。