AN ONLINE LEARNING SERVICE APPARATUS FOR CONNECTING MENTORS AND MENTEES TO LEARN ENGLISH WRITING

摘要

It includes: storage unit that online service, which provides the composition for studying English by matching director and a mentee, connection process portion point, English composition correction carries out the position of information processing, guidance selection processing department, storage unit storage: mentee's information includes the first link information and first personal about mentee; Director's information includes the second link information, the second personal information, and guidance about background and verifying document are related to and background; English composition learning information; It is corrected with English composition and carries out information. Connection process portion sorting looks into the information of storage unit, is inputted using the first connection or the second connection information from mentee's terminal or director's terminal; And transmit British composition learning information and the correction of above-mentioned English composition carries out information and be stored in storage unit and transmit British composition correction simultaneously to mentee's terminal to carry out information and be stored in storage unit corresponding to mentee or director and membership qualification in the link information to counselor terminal. British composition correction carries out the storage English composition of information processing apparatus, which writes in terminal, in storage part together with first man information, such as; Correct waiting& prime; Information; Storing British composition is the counselor terminal of correction as & prime storage units; Under correction& prime; Information; Correction data is stored, score and amendment comment input instruction person terminal are as & prime storage units; Correct completion& prime; Information. Director selects processing unit distribution that tutorial message is sent to be stored in storage unit, when composition writes in mentee's terminal importation in English; The guidance that second personal information and storing selects storage part together with first man information and it is above-mentioned written English composition as; Correct waiting& prime; Information. ;The 2014 of copyright KIPO submissions;[Reference numerals] (200) are used for the composition to study English; (210) communications portion; (220) storage unit; (221) mentee's information; (222) tutorial message; (223) English composition learning information; (224) correction English composition carries out information; (225) data information is automatically corrected; (226) event information; (230) comparing part; (231) member registration handles part; (232) connection process portion point; (233) correction English composition carries out information processing apparatus; (234) guidance selection processing part; Handle the part of (235) message; (236) mentee's level handles part; (237) Guidance Levels handle part; (238) event handling portion; (239) point processing part