唐代著名诗人的作品中,时有一些瑕疵.如元稹《行宫》中,"宫"字重复过多,缺少锤炼;卢纶《塞下曲其三》,"欲""逐单于"与"雪满弓刀"情理相悖;贺知章《咏柳》自我设疑自作解答不合逻辑;李白《宣州谢朓楼饯别校书叔云》文句意杂,《塞下曲其一》炼字不精;张九龄《望月怀远》"竟夕"用词欠工,"赠月"弄巧成拙;韦庄《稻田》摹写失真;杜荀鹤《蚕妇》遣词欠精;孟浩然《岁末归南山》境界不高,语意重复;杜甫《房兵曹胡马》有失层次;王之涣《送别》语涉歧义.%In works of some famous Tang poets, flaws appear occasionally.Such as in Yuan Zhen's "Temporary Palace", the word "palace" is repeated too much, which is lack of refining.In Lu Lun's "Song around the Border Fortress-the third piece", "will", "chase Chanyu" is inconsistent with "snow has been all over arrows and broadswords".In He Zhizhang's "Ode to Willow", putting a question then answering it himself is illogical.In Li Bai's "Giving a Farewell Dinner to the Collator Uncle Yun at Xietiao Tower in Xuanzhou", the meaning of words and sentences is very complex and puzzling."Song around the Border Fortress-the first piece" is also lack of word refining.In Zhang Jiulin's "Moonlit Lovesickness", the word "overnight" is not so orderly and "giving away (the moon)" is a seemingly clever thing which turns out to be a foolish one instead.In Wei Zhuang's "Rice Field", the description is inaccurate and anamorphic.Du Xunhe's "sericulture women" is lack of precise in words.Meng Haoran's "Back to the South Mountain at the End of Year" shows no high spiritual level and has repeated expressions.Du Fu's "Bingcao Fang's Hu Horse" is lack of sense of layers.Wang Zhihuan's "farewell" leads to ambiguity.All these discussions mean to arouse people's interest in reading and studying the Tang poetry.
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